Thread:Endershot/@comment-26897006-20150719072810/@comment-26897006-20150719084339

Let's take your Severed Head page (before i cleaned it up) for example-


 * The caption under the image (eww) wasn't necessarily needed.
 * You were using a lot of 'you's. Just to let you know, use 'the player' instead of 'you'
 * Also, all stats must be in bullets, not in paragraphs for convenience of reading. Most of your pages have stats in paras..

Hope this helped!