Thread:JannePlays2/@comment-24525253-20150810135519

Hello JannePlays2. :)

I've noticed that your articles are in need of improvement, because currently they are not quite of standard, as I've noticed with the original Heaven page that I modified heavily to abide the rules, etc. etc..

First of all, I think you should stop putting things like 'ba dum tiss theres a sprite', 'more ideas' etc. etc.. It makes it look like a sort of joke article, and most good articles should not have such a thing in them.

Second, with some of your red-link cleaning it almost seems like you're just flying through it. Your Skydirt article was about 6-7 words and I modified it to make it bigger than that. :/

Third, you have a lot of redlinks. Please prevent this, but also make sure that when you're red-link cleaning, your new articles should still be normal-sized and of quality. 